The article is well written and quite enlightening. Kudos to the team. I find this quite interesting and easy to read
Suggestions below
- Though it appears that risk perception is high among population, it might be beneficial to include some direction to guide targetted messaging to address some of the barriers such as beleif that the vaccines might have some side effects as part of the conclusion
- Slight typo detected in this opening sentence …"Of the total participants, 93.0% were vaccinated against COVID 19 with more one more doses in total"… another small format issue .. Title Outsome Measurement… the M might need to be small letter to be consistent with others
- Please explore if it is necessary to differentiate between those that resist because of the quick authorization of the vaccines by the WHO (40%), and those that opined that speedy development of the vaccines (18%) constituted a barrier for uptake
- Consider positioning the definition of vaccine hesitancy earlier in the write up to aid flow
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